Journal Entry
Today we had our first rough draft peer revision groups for
our crime and punishment essays. Most of the people in class didn’t bring
theirs so whoever had theirs would just read to the people in their group just
like a regular revision day. We of course got tips, pointers and other feedback
on how we could make our good papers better ones. I wanted Mr. Sweeney to look
over mine before my final draft but he was occupied doing the same for another one
of my classmates. I got some pretty good feedback from my classmates in my
group, most consisted of checking grammar and spelling and broaden my ideas a
little more and not be so one sided which is a valid point I guess; but in a
sense there supposed to be sided because it’s a persuasive essay but I took all
criticism as constructive. This paper so far was the hardest to write but I did
learn a lot that I didn’t before about the subject. People do such crazy things
to get punished in such a barbaric way. Why cant we all just get along.
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